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Hey, check out my story. - fernando - 19 Jul 11
Xenith.net published one of my short stories. Check it out here:
http://www.xenith.net/xenithmag/matthew-a-nolan-dancing-alone
RE: Hey, check out my story. - hamolton - 19 Jul 11
Cool story bro.
I should probably get around to reading it.
RE: Hey, check out my story. - Oracle - 19 Jul 11
(19 Jul 11, 04:49PM)hamolton Wrote: Cool story bro.
So much winning.
RE: Hey, check out my story. - Fate - 19 Jul 11
Lol. I actually read that, although... I was kind of expecting something that's uhh... Idk how to explain... Hmm, what was the significance of the scissors?
Anyways, for you who hasn't bothered reading it, or just think it's tl;dr. Basically it's about a couple who live in an apartment, and they go to the bar each night; the girl dances in the bar, with men "tasting" her with their eyes, then they go back to their apartment and have sex.
RE: Hey, check out my story. - V-Man - 19 Jul 11
The scissors are what he used to cut the vines off the fence. Or, I guess he settled on a knife.
The vines are probably a symbol of the problems that have overgrown his life. The story is about him recognizing that he has gotten into a rut and is desperate to get out of it.
RE: Hey, check out my story. - fernando - 20 Jul 11
Thanks for the comments, I can't express how good it feels to have people read my work.
RE: Hey, check out my story. - Fate - 20 Jul 11
V-Man, you genius! XD
Literature is my worst subject in school. :|
Oh and @fernando, you're welcome :)
RE: Hey, check out my story. - getham - 23 Jul 11
hi the story is nice
RE: Hey, check out my story. - CicloN - 23 Jul 11
I havent read it but its nice.
RE: Hey, check out my story. - Impakt'd - 24 Jul 11
Nice work. I'm working on a piece at the moment with a friend (doing the I write one piece, she completes the next). Maybe I'll post it when we're done and consider submitting it somewhere. Congrats on getting something on the interweb.